Waves

Waves crashing in
Endlessly

Gulls flying by
Tirelessly

Children running ’round
Breathlessly

Watching the scenery
Dreamily

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2 thoughts on “Waves

  1. Nice, short little poem that I really like. My only nitpick is that “tirelessly” seems to have a tad too many syllables, but other than that, I like what you do with these words. You give us the groundwork for a picture, and then you let our imaginations run wild with it.

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